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Neurotic Nocturne

Post  Gothman on Sat Nov 03, 2012 1:38 pm

And I guess this was about the night,

clucking its tongue in silent disgust

as people rub their heated bodies on the cold bed.

Dead.

Dead as the stars that shine no longer,

basking in eternal darkness

and weeping in frozen lament.

Or the cold.

The shivery cold that covers the dreams

of those who are asleep,

of those who are awake yet hopeless,

of those who are numb,

of those like the night...

The night that is glorious amidst the songs of the owl and the hymns of the wind,

the night which shelters the pain and longingness of a betrayed heart.

But I guess the night is just lonely.

The people sleep while she is awake.

A flutter of insignificance from her deepest wombs,

yearning to cradle the form of her unborn child.

-Gary Rolnet Mojica
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Post  AmyLeeFan on Sat Nov 03, 2012 2:06 pm

This is cool! I mean, seriously. It's dark and very well written! Very Happy Haha. Amazing! cheers

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Post  Gothman on Sat Nov 03, 2012 2:08 pm

Thanks. Glad you like it! Smile Gonna post some more if it's okay? Laughing
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Post  AmyLeeFan on Sat Nov 03, 2012 2:13 pm

Sure! No problem Smile We'd love to see more of your works Smile Feel free to share it! That's why this topic is made. For everybody to share their talents, whatever it may be Very Happy

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Post  theriseandthefall_EV on Wed Jul 02, 2014 2:18 pm

So cool! Keep up the good work! More poems, please?
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