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Post  Gothman on Sat Nov 03, 2012 2:37 pm

Made this while I was still in college. Some song inspired me to write this. Guess what... lol!

No more tears on your pillow tonight.
Let me put you to sleep--
an undisturbed, quiet, drunken,
sporadic slumber in this hushed evening.
I will hold your hand as you drift in a world
of perfection, as I lay you on a cuddling lullaby.
Your snores will fill this small room with mild and sweet cadence,
surfacing like a cold mist rising up in the sky.
I'll count the tempo of your slow breathing--
one, two, three...ninety-nine,
while I stay indulged in your vulnerable form
as you are sleeping.
The constant falling and then rising of your chest
is like a tender cat that walks with waltzing steps.
Caress that frail love that you see
in your dreams,
that same dream that I want you to dream:
Me in you arms.
I will stay awake for I promise to protect you
from the ghosts that surround your bed.
I won't fall for that seductive lethargy
while you are in deep comfort.
By morning you'll see me no more.
Only my voice that whispers your name will linger,
'till the twilight is once again in sight.
"Goodnight, sleep tight."

trivia: this was not published in our paper even if I was the editor since our head adviser tagged it as too pornographic, and I disagree. Twisted Evil

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Post  Gratzel on Sun Nov 04, 2012 10:26 am

deep words for deep thoughts cheers

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Post  AmyLeeFan on Sun Nov 04, 2012 2:35 pm

Yep. Thought so too Smile Very Happy

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